Serenity,
...the brain is still tinkering
Mine never stops tinkering, even after I've posted a story. As I said earlier, this particular piece has really struck a chord with me and I've got some good ideas about expanding it into a larger piece.
Looking forward to reading yours.
Roy
Very nice Maso. It left me curious to know what she had to do
Yes, I thought it might leave a few curious. I think not having that detail makes the story even more intriguing. It leaves the reader to imagine all sorts of different scenarios.
Tova,
Sad Maso. But deep down I think every woman wants to believe every man she's ever kissed still is secretly in love with her.
Hmm, interesting. I think there is a great story in that idea, although I'm not sure if this is where my story was going. Still, you've given me food for thought.